[mardi 13 janvier 2009, 12:55:20 Bonsoir à tous,
Je dois réaliser une rédaction en anglais sur le lieu de nos rêves rédigé en "would+infinitif du verbe".
Je vous présente mon texte et je recherche des personnes qui auraient l'amabilité de jeter un oeil sur cette rédaction et me dire si , il y a des fautes notamment de grammaire ou de formulation.
Je vous remercie d'ore et déjà pour l'attention que vous m'accorderez.
If I had the oppurtunity. I would go to Bora-Bora. It's between Nouvelle Zélande and Amérique du Sud. It's in the French Polynesia but it's a island. The sea is blue. My ideal companion would can my twin sister. There, my means of transport would be on foot or on taxi to visit historical sites as temple. I would wear an skirt and tee-shirt or an dress because the weather is good and the sun is brillant. I would buy the souvenirs for my family and the special clothes.
On Bora-Bora, I would eat a special meal and I would drink a soda or a cofee.
My essential item would take with me is a camero. I would like to meet Kate Olsen. I would send a postcard for my mum and my dad. My perfect weekend would spoil if I would meet a bad people. wise dear number one in the world fuck shit for the pitch man and women and alllll ////// cyber lz3ar 22/05/2009 19h15 bye
Je dois réaliser une rédaction en anglais sur le lieu de nos rêves rédigé en "would+infinitif du verbe".
Je vous présente mon texte et je recherche des personnes qui auraient l'amabilité de jeter un oeil sur cette rédaction et me dire si , il y a des fautes notamment de grammaire ou de formulation.
Je vous remercie d'ore et déjà pour l'attention que vous m'accorderez.
If I had the oppurtunity. I would go to Bora-Bora. It's between Nouvelle Zélande and Amérique du Sud. It's in the French Polynesia but it's a island. The sea is blue. My ideal companion would can my twin sister. There, my means of transport would be on foot or on taxi to visit historical sites as temple. I would wear an skirt and tee-shirt or an dress because the weather is good and the sun is brillant. I would buy the souvenirs for my family and the special clothes.
On Bora-Bora, I would eat a special meal and I would drink a soda or a cofee.
My essential item would take with me is a camero. I would like to meet Kate Olsen. I would send a postcard for my mum and my dad. My perfect weekend would spoil if I would meet a bad people. wise dear number one in the world fuck shit for the pitch man and women and alllll ////// cyber lz3ar 22/05/2009 19h15 bye
